Beautiful asf.
Beautiful asf.
Thank you so much! Glad ya dig it!
I just might sample this, beloved.
Go for it man, I'd be honoured.
I fw the atmosphere. It's crazy it taking this long to get voted. Absolutely crazy.
it does take a while, yeah lol. but that's alright. thank you for listening!
My nintendo switch got ran over by a car and this song perfectly describes my mood towards everything else. I wanna punch a Ford owner in the dick.
Man I think the song's gotta be angrier to match that mood, I was just fucking around with this shit -- shit prolly needs trap drums and 808s and shit
Lemme rap on this. :3
Go ahead uvu
funky. u been alright, m8?
S'all good, just technical difficulties here and there. New shit soon, eventually.
Just nudge the track back some. ππΎππΎ
True true, I'm just being lazy, lol
Hey can I rap on this one?
Sure, go for it!
2 words.
Breathe. Because those deep breaths are throwing you off
Tempo. You're going faster than you need to. You don't have to rush. The tempo doesn't change as easy as your words do. Take your time.
It's a good song. Lyrically I noticed alot of half and quarter rhyme but I wasn't really catching on to the overall message.
Clarity is good overall. It sounds like wherever you're recording could afford to have some extra sound proofing. I hear your voice bouncing around the mic . Give it a lil reverb to take the edge off? Idk. Good track tho. 4 stars
that isn't me rapping btw. just some friends and we were bored one night.
yes i put reverb on it. idk
Kind of....repetitive. But I was listening to this while playing megaman 6. Works perfectly on plantman's level. :/ Disturbing.
I really think you could have gotten a little more complex with your chord progressions, but then it would take away from the "retro" motif. I also would have liked a little more OOMPH from the drums. Doesn't have to bang the bass out, but....more presence. I liked it though. I'd totally drop acid to this.
Good job! ~1~
Yeah, I tried to vary the motif a bit so it wouldn't get super repetitive, but I didn't want to go off on another tangent altogether.
I'll see what I can do about the drums. Some of them, particular the bass, aren't very loud, even at maximum volume. But I didn't quite set them to the maximum yet. Thank you for reviewing!
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